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I seldom write poetry. It seldom occurs to me. Most of the poetry I have written (aside from doggerel for birthday notes) has been for inclusion in novels. There's not much of that, either—except for numerous cantos from The Järnhann Saga, which readers (and listeners!) seem to like very much.

If you prefer light-hearted doggerel to "straight" poetry, go to the end of this page for a piece called "Virtuality," and lemme know what you think of it.

First, though, a short poem inspired by a mountain I know intimately. I've used this poem in two novels (is that cheating?)—The Varkaus Conspiracy, and The Reality Matrix.

San Francisco Peaks*
by John Dalmas

Primal mountain bursting long ago,
rupturing the darkness with your might,
shrouded with clouds of ash and fumes
that glowed and pulsed and shuddered in the night,
your shoulders flowing red with molten rock,
blast furnace heat and sullen light.

Is that you?

Is that you
so calm beneath the sky,
slopes serene in snow,
your forest frosted white?

Ah, I know you in many moods,
green, with branches dripping rain,
yellow with aspen
or blind with blizzard.

I know you now!

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* The San Francisco Peaks lie just north of Flagstaff, Arizona. They are the eroded rim of a gigantic volcano, a ring of peaks surrounding a caldera, a huge, boulder-jumbled crater. You like spruce? It has spruce by the square mile. Aspen? It’s feet are buried with aspen. Snow? One April about 1972 they closed the ski resort because the lift towers were buried!

Or Indian spirits? Ask the Navajos...or for a fictional treatment, find a copy of The Reality Matrix in a used bookstore. (I lived Chapter 1 one night.)

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Excerpts from
The Järnhann Saga*

Verses from the Järnhann Saga
(with the Kumalo translation)

Sågs d’ förste a en pojke,
dä d’ svävte upp i himmlen
jussom örn ör lunna vannen
när d’ stirra ned på jedden
simne upp t’ jämne ytan.
Röpte höd å pekte uppåt.
Dä jussom kjämpnar tälte om,
som döjtse häxen sejta
bärar gamlarne fra sjäänor.
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It was first a child that saw it,
saw it hovering in the morning,
like an eagle over water
watching ready for the salmon
rising to the quiet surface.
Called aloud and pointed upward.
"’tis the thing the warriors spoke of,
that the German seeress told us
carries ancients from the stars!"
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Kniven låg i slappa sommen,
söv vä sidan a sin stridshäss,
söv iblann sin drömna kjämper
slummranne på stilla sletten
i d’ lägren trygg å sikker,
slutan om a vakna posser
å a smylla hässpatryller.
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I knivens panna pette viske,
snydde vä å blåste drömmen
bort, då satt han upp å stärde.
Ingen vaken såg de öjnar.
Plyssli i d’ mörka natten,
någon vita, jenomsynli
viste sej tä Knivens springor.
Såg han mäkti Järnhanns spöke,
kjennte Ynglingen i annen
viskanne i sjäänli stillen.
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Listi lay relaxed and sleeping,
lay beside his horse in slumber,
lay among his dreaming warriors
sleeping on the silent prairie
in their war camp strong, protected,
guarded round by watchful sentires
and by stealthy scouts on horseback.

In his mind there came a whisper,
touched and broke his fragile dreaming,
sat up then and looked about him.
Nothing waking caught his vision.
Then within the darkness flickered
something thinly white, transparent.
As he stared with eyes thin-slitted,
saw the ghost of mighty Ironhand,
saw the spirit of the Youngling
whispering in the starlit stillness.
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*The Järnhann Saga exists only as separated cantos and verses, but there are quite a few of them. If you like the sample presented here, let me know (dalmas@earthlink.net) and I'll add more later. Or you can find them in the last three of the Yngling series, and The Orc Wars. I can also include a "historical" discussion of the post-plague evolution of 29th century Scandinavian, the language of the poems. (I'm the only authority on 29th century Scandinavian.)

Virtuality
by John Dalmas

Marching through Georgia with a finger up my nose,
I picked a purple dandelion and thought it was a rose,
Cump Sherman looked at me and told my friends that I was crazy,
that I had picked a touch-me-not and thought it was a daisy.
I was a little miffed at such a mis-repre-sentation,
and so he had me court mar-tialled for in-subor-dination.

The court called in a botanist to settle who was right,
a forensical taxonomist who wasn’t very bright.
“They’re both Compositae,” he said, “the dandelion and daisy,
and thus,” he argued, “technically the dif-fer-ence is hazy.
In a sense they both are right, and who can say they’re not?”
“I can,” the general replied, and had the fellow shot.

So I booted up Gray’s Manual, by Microsoft you know,
with hypertext, and color holographs that flower and grow.
“Smell this,” I said, “and you will know at once that I was right.”
He sniffed, and sneezed 500 times, it took him half the night.
For it was none of the above, he learned to his displeasure,
but virtual goldenrod, with virtual pollen beyond mmeasure.

“Case dismissed!” the general said when he’d run out of snot,
then had me taken to the yard, against the wall, and shot.
Interesting, I told myself, as I viewed my empty body,
I’d have to say that both our mental processes were shoddy.
Reality is virtual in either case, you see,
though one is somewhat subtler, the “real” reality.

The general too looked down, for he had also died I found,
he’d sneezed his brains right out his nose, to soak into the ground.
“Ah lad,” he said, “we both were wrong, and therein lies a lesson,
which when we’ve learned just what it is will surely be a blessin’.”
We shook on that, and both agreed reality is a school,
where we’d been students many times, it real-ly was cool.

And when we’d had a little break to digest our education,
we’d both go down and have another re-matri-culation.


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